A poem
Inners
To teacher Elton
Routine I hate
Time I create
During my week
My inners are not fake
My feeling today
Is like everyday
Happy but tired
Near and far away
I want to feel
Not angry or ill
But I’m sure one day
Satisfied I’ll (fly away)
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4 comments:
yay, a poem. I LOVE POETRY!!
Very nice poem, that express her feeling. It's simply and sincere. She had opened her heart, showing her hope for better days.
I appreciate very much, because when I read this poem, it's seem like hearing a lyric song.
Hi Juliana,
Wonderful!I never have thought about reading a poem written by you. I knew you are an intelligent and critical girl,but I didn't have noticed your poetical side. Your poem is full of contrasts, but pelnty of hope in the future, too. This is what stimulate as to be better doing the best that we can. Writing is an interesting way to develop the sensibility.I hope you can continue to show your feeling through other poem. Congratulation! Hugs. Men Aparecida
What is 'inners'?? 'entranhas'???
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